Monday, January 08, 2007

Subtle Change




you witness
day giving way to night-
old mountain

This is in gracious response to One Deep Breath

17 comments:

susanlavonne said...

these take my breath away....both the photo and the brilliant haiku.
i fell in love with Rainier the first time I visited it and cannot wait to visit again someday

n.b. said...

I like how you are addressing the mountain in this. Beautiful photo too!

Tammy said...

Awesome photo with great haiku to compliment it.

Regina Clare Jane said...

And just how many times did that mountain witness day giving way to night? Incredible to imagine...
thanks for this lovely haiku and picture.

Roswila said...

This old mountain thanks you for the lovely vision. :-)

Crafty Green Poet said...

stunning photo and excellent haiku.

Sandy said...

This is the first post I have looked at today. What inspiraton! Thank you.

Parisparfait said...

What a lovely thought - all the things the mountain has witnessed! Lovely photo and haiku.

Brian said...

Eternal white bones
heaped high in random patterns
melting in summer

getzapped said...

Thank you all for your generous comments. I feel fortunate to have this grand mountain in my life.

Jone said...

We are so fortunate to have these mountains. The haiku honors the photo.

cloudscome said...

Lovely balance of time and perspective. I adore the photo too!

AnnieElf said...

What a gorgeous picture and no evidence of humanity at its feet. Did the mountain answer back?

Liza Lee Miller said...

Lovely image, lovely haiku. Thank you.

Shelley said...

Gorgeous. Makes me want to go read some A.R. Ammons...

Jane Poe (aka Deborah) said...

You captured the majesty. Much peace, JP

HARDWAX said...

Ah, takes my breath away, beautiful mountain, beautiful photo of a mountain